improve problem analysis project 1

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Can u please use the comment and reply of the professor then improve it ?

here are some comment from my professor

Hi ,

Would you be willing to revise and re-submit your Problem Analysis report with complete and accurate documentation in the proper APA format? If so, I would be willing to re-grade it. You would need to email me the revised version before the end of the day on Tuesday. Would you be willing to do this? Just let me know.

If you have questions about how to provide parenthetical references in the APA documentation style, please ask me or refer to the APA section of Purdue’s Online Writing Lab.

Sincerely

Hi

Thank you for sending me your Problem Analysis report. I have attached a file containing your report and my comments in red. Please heed my comments and the assignment instructions and examples as you revise. Did you submit a draft to SVSU’s online Writing Center?

In your bibliography, you put that you retrieved some of your sources in November of 2017. Are you trying to submit a report that you or someone else wrote last year? If you retrieved the sources this month, then put “Retrieved June 2018 from. . . .”

Some of your sources are not properly documented. In some paragraphs, you clearly are drawing figures and statistics from published sources–but in some cases you have not used parenthetical references to identify the source or sources of the information.

In some sections of your report, you quote passages word-for-word from your sources without using quotation marks. You should use quotation marks and parenthetical references to identify direct quotes. Otherwise, you are plagiarizing, which can result in you receiving no credit for the assignment. Any time that you quote something word-for-word, you should enclose it in quotations marks and place a parenthetical reference after it identifying that author’s last name and the publication year. Please see my comments in the attached file. Also, please refer to the APA section of Purdue’s Online Writing Lab.

If you have questions, please let me know.

The document format may not be able to display the chart I’m looking for, but the PDF format is visible, which is why the document format may have large white space. Two intermediate charts are attached. Rui Wang, Jun 16 at 7:15pm
Hi , Thank you for submitting your Problem Analysis report. You analyze a range of causes and effects of this problem. Don’t focus on the solution in your Problem Analysis. You will propose a solution and a project plan in your Proposal. Pay attention to word choice, grammar, and sentence structure. Errors make parts of your report a bit hard to follow. Be sure to provide effective transitions and topic sentences for your paragraphs. Introduce your quotes by identifying the source. Try to avoid using long block quotes. Use short quotes, paraphrases, and summaries instead. Some of your information is not properly documented. Please see the comments that I wrote in your Problem Analysis report. Sincerely

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i need help creating an excel document for statistics

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You manage Human Relations for your company. One of your sales managers has retired, leaving an opening. You are considering two different employees for the position. Both are highly qualified so you have decided to evaluate their sales performance for the past year.

Use the Week 4 Data Set to create and calculate the following in Excel®:

  1. Determine the range of values in which you would expect to find the average weekly sales for the entire sales force in your company 90% of the time.
    • Calculate the impact of increasing the confidence level to 95%?
    • Calculate the impact of increasing the sample size to 150, assuming the same mean and standard deviation, but allowing the confidence level to remain at 90%?
  2. Based on the calculated confidence interval for weekly sales on the sample of 50 reps at a 90% confidence level:
    • Calculate both Reps’ average weekly performance and highlight if it is greater than the population mean.
  3. You want to determine whether there is a statistically different average weekly sales between Sales Rep A and Sales Rep B.
    • Create Null and Alternative Hypothesis statements that would allow you to determine whether their sales performance is statistically different or not.
    • Use a significance level of .05 to conduct a t-test of independent samples to compare the average weekly sales of the two candidates.
    • Calculate the p-value?
  4. Considering that individual you did not promote:
    • Determine whether this person’s average weekly sales are greater than the average weekly sales for the 50 sales reps whose data you used to develop confidence intervals.
    • Create Null and Alternative Hypothesis statements that would allow you to determine whether the new Sales Manager’s weekly average sales are greater than the sample of Sales Reps.
    • Use a significance level of .05 to conduct a t-test of independent samples to compare the average weekly sales of both.
    • Calculate the p-value?
 
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can you write the essay and reflection 6 7 pages

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Directions to Candidates:

Write an essay on the Principles of Educational Leadership I. Draw upon your experiences in education, research,

theory, and describe your content knowledge of the assessment tasks listed here:

1-Describe your ability to collaborate with faculty and community members by collecting and analyzing

information pertinent to the improvement of the school’s educational environment. (ELCC 4.1, ISLLC 4A, CF 2)(one page)

2-

Describe a your ability to mobilize community resources by promoting an understanding, appreciation, and

use of the diverse cultural, social, and intellectual resources within the school community. (ELCC 4.2, ISLLC 4B, CF 2)(one page)

3- Describe your ability to respond to community interests and needs by building and sustaining positive school

relationships with families and caregivers. (ELCC 4.3, ISLLC 4C, CF 2) (one page)

4-Describe your ability to act with integrity and fairness to ensure that schools are accountable for every

student’s academic and social success. (ELCC 5.1, ISLLC 5A, CF3) (one page)

5-Describe your ability to model principles of self awareness, reflective practice, transparency, and ethical

behavior as related to their roles within the school. (ELCC 5.2, ISLLC 5B, CF3) (one page)

6-Describe a your ability to safeguard the values of democracy, equity, and diversity. (ELCC 5.3, ISLLC 5C, CF3) (one page)

7-Describe your ability to influence local, district, state, and national decisions affecting student learning in a school environment. (ELCC 6.2, ISLLC 6B, CF2) (one page)

8- Describe your ability to anticipate and assess emerging trends and initiatives in order to adapt school-based leadership strategies.(ELLCC 6.3,ISLLC 6C,CF2)

Reflection:

 
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car loans and insurance

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The most common methods for financing automobiles are through car loans or car leases. Car loans are personal loans provided by banks and credit unions and can be repaid over a period of years. However, with a car lease, a person never owns the car. The bank or credit union selected purchases the car and rents it to you for a fixed period. Once the fixed period of the lease expires, the financial institution takes back the car and sells it. In this assignment, you will compare the differences between car loans and car leases.

A car loan is one of the most significant investments made by a typical American family. An alternative to the traditional auto loan is the auto lease.

Using the readings for this module, the Argosy University online library resources, and the Internet, respond to the following:

  • Examine the differences between a car loan and a car lease. Consider the following factors:
    • Advantages and disadvantages of both leasing a vehicle and purchasing a vehicle
    • The process you will personally follow in making a decision on taking a car loan or leasing your next car
  • Explain how leasing versus financing a new automobile changes your insurance options/requirements for the automobile. Consider that auto insurance requirements differ by state.
  • Describe the requirements specific to your state and whether insurance requirements differ on a financed purchase over a lease.
  • Identify other variables that influence one’s insurance premium.
  • Describe the actions one can take to ensure that auto insurance premiums are not unnecessarily high.

Write your initial response in 200–300 words. Apply APA standards to citation of sources.

 
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discussion 16 1

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Reading: The Late Mattia Pascal, Chapters I-IX

Discussion: Who is Mattia Pascal? What do you think of Mattia Pascal’s action after winning the money at the casino? Would you have done the same thing? If not, what would you have done?

this should be no less then 200 words.

please take time little bit early to go over the reading becase it is little bit long

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this work is two part… the first one is the one that you will do which is the main post.

the other part is commenting on other student post. (i will share that with you once student post their main post. don’t worry about it,,, this part should be so easy 🙂 )

 
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course work answer questions

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Please read the uploaded files then answer the questions below:

1. From a Care Ethics perspectives, is Winston acting ethically? Why or why not? ( Please read the Housing Allowance and my care lecture)

2. The issue of Walmart, or, said differently, the issue of big business taking over market share form small business, is not an ethical issue according to the text. Why? (Please read the Walmart file and Justice lecture)

 
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concentric zone theory and statistics 1

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Write a 250- to 350-word paper Remember to explain what type of statistical data would be useful and how it relates to concentric zone theory.

Include at least two peer reviewed references.

Format your paper consistent with APA guidelines.

 
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critical thinking power point

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In our text Our Iceberg Is Melting, Kotter provides a story-based scenario of a situation needing a change intervention.

Review the reading from our text and create a presentation about how Kotter’s first four steps were applied in the story and then reflect on an organizational change effort that you are familiar with from the past (failed, successful, or somewhere in between) using Kotter’s first four steps to diagnose the strengths and weaknesses of the change effort.

Make sure to include what was done well, what was done poorly, and what was lacking in the change effort.

Your presentation should be a minimum of 5 slides and a maximum of 8 slides.

Critical Elements Exemplary (100%) Proficient (90%) Needs Improvement (70%) Not Evident (0%) Value Analysis Analyzes and clearly states how Kotter’s steps (1-4) applied to the story Analyzes and states how Kotter’s steps (1-4) applied to the story Analyzes and states how some of Kotter’s steps (1-4) applied to the story Does not analyze or state how Kotter’s steps (1-4) applied to the story 25 Evidence Clearly provides evidence of being able to lead a change effort Provides evidence of being able to lead a change effort Provides some evidence of being able to lead a change effort Does not provide evidence of being able to lead a change effort 25 Critical Reflections Clearly identifies strengths and weaknesses of what was done well, what was done poorly, and what was lacking in the change effort Identifies strengths and weaknesses of what was done well, what was done poorly, and what was lacking in the change effort Identifies some strengths and weaknesses of what was done well, what was done poorly, and what was lacking in the change effort Does not identify strengths and weaknesses of what was done well, what was done poorly, and what was lacking in the change effort 30 Writing (Mechanics) Presentation is easily understood, clear, and concise using proper citation methods where applicable with no errors in citations Presentation is easily understood using proper citation methods where applicable with few errors in citations Presentation is understandable using proper citation methods where applicable with a number of errors in citations Presentation is not understandable and does not use proper citation methods where applicable 20 Total 100%

 
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cracked perspectives

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This is very easy assignment, it’s only one page in APA summary, please see the rubric and follow the instructions clearly. Please follow the citations same as the one in the folde

 
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just 300 words your initial post should be at least 300 words 1

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Instructions:
In preparing for this discussion, read Chapters 8 and 16 (p 338) of the course text. For your initial post, address the following in the discussion forum:
•Define disease management (DM) programs.
•Describe the impacts of DM programs on healthcare quality and cost.
•Identify challenges in DM programs.
•Examine a successful DM program from real life and address
(a) What is its accreditation status?
(b) Why is this program successful?
(c) Can it be replicated in other settings?
Your initial post should be at least 300 words.

 
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